SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: DJRA1.1.1
Title: DJRA1.1.1 Compute Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI_DJRA1.1.1_v06.odt
Author(s): Massimo Sgaravatto Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Michele Carpene' Affiliation: CINECA EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1/SA2

Review date 10/15/2010
Author(s) revision date 08/31/2010
Reviewer acceptance date 10/15/2010

General comments

Some missing acronyms and references

More details to provide

Conclusions to add at the end of the doc

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Nothing to add

Detailed comments on the content

N Page Section Observations Is Addressed?
1 3 null Missing authors and reviewers Ok, done  
2 10 3.1 Missing acronyms and references    
3 12 3.3 Maybe to use different colors for components covered by EMI would be helpful. Ok: picture has been redone  
4 13 3.3 a sentence has been duplicated Ok fixed  
5 14 3.3 "Normal" means "Serial" In gLite terminology, it is called Normal. At any rate I changed into Serial/Normal  
6 18 3.5.1 Provide more informations on jobs scripts generation/correct "performs" verb    
7 18 3.5.2 Provide more details/Missing reference also here    
8 24 4.2 It is not clear if the evolution plans are related to the harmonization plans and in which ways. Explained what these plans are targeted for  
9 24 4.2.2 correct "in particolar"/ "to then be able"? what it means? Ok fixed  
10 25 4.2.3 feedback mechanism? Not fully understood what is comment here. In the text I think it is explained what is the problem (along with the relevant use-case), and the proposed solution  
11 26 4.2.5 conclusions? The PTB (where the template for these deliverables was decided) thought that a conclusion chapter was not needed. At any rate I added such chapter to address your comment  

-- FloridaEstrella - 01-Oct-2010

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