JRA1/SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.1.2
Title: DJRA1.1.2 - Compute Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): M. Cecchi Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: I. Marton Affiliation: NIIF EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1/JRA1

Review date 05/20/2011
Author(s) revision date 05/23/2011
Reviewer acceptance date 05/24/2011

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

It's possibly a minor thing, but a page numbering would be extremely useful for the printed versions of this documents.

In general the document was a great summary of the progress made in the last and the plans for the next year. At the report section in some subsections the main content (what was exactly done) isn't explicit enough, but is present. It was just little bit hard to mine out. This is a semi-general comment, I couldn't tell the exact locations where I felt this, but will mention at the detailed comments with the exact subsection if manage to find something serious or directly in the edited document.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

The detailed comments, questions are inside the document as comments.

-- IvanMarton - 20-May-2011


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