JRA1/SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.1.2
Title: DJRA1.1.2 - Compute Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): M. Cecchi Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: I. Marton Affiliation: NIIF EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1/JRA1

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 3 Document log There is a minor typo at the 0.4 issue: deadlines instead of dealines    
2 6 Purpose Under 1/b section "possibly" instead of "possibily"    
3 7 Terminology API is correctly "Application Programming Interface"    
4 7 Terminology The JSDL line is duplicated, first occurrence is unnecessary    
5 7 Terminology typo: "Bookkeeping" instead of "Bookkeping"    
6 8 Terminology typo: "Command line" instead of "Commandline"    
7 8 Terminology Isn't XNJS standing for "eXtensible Network Job Supervisor"?    
8 8 References The abbreviation connecting to the "http://gridengine.sunsource.net/" address is GE, or OGE, not SG    
Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 06-May-2011

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