Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.1.3
Title: DJRA1.1.3 - Compute Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): M. Cecchi Due date: 30/04/12

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Krzysztof Bendyczak Affiliation: UWAR EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1/SA1

Review date 04/26/2012
Author(s) revision date 05/02/2012
Reviewer acceptance date 05/02/2012

Version 0.8 was accepted

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General comments

The document looks good. I had quite a few comments (placed as notes in the reviewed file) but vast majority of them should be very easy to fix. The most important from them are those listed below:

  • both comments in section 2.1 and 2.2
  • in section 2.7
  • in section 2.16
  • in section 2.19

Some (simple and rare) language mistakes were fixed directly in the text.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)


Detailed comments on the content

Everything was placed in the document with changes tracking turned on.

-- FloridaEstrella - 24-Apr-2012

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