Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: Dx.y.z
Title: ______________________ Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): __________________ Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: _____________________ Affiliation: ____ EMI Activity/External project or Institute: ______

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 15 3 Summary table
Please include legend (meaning of numbers, colours, etc)
can we add 8.x and 12.x objectives to the table for completeness
Was requested by Balasz is fixed
2     Remove "ACHIEVEMENTS AND DEVIATIONS IN" from 3.x headings Was requested by Balasz is fixed
3 24 4 Please include legend (meaning of numbers, colours, etc)
Remove "WORKPLAN FOR" from 4.x headings
  is fixed
4     Conclusions
I know we forgot the conclusions chapter, but could you write a short one. Restating the aim of the report and giving an overall assessment of how the first year Data area went, and overall outlook of the second year.
  Conlusion added

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 02-Jun-2011

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