Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.4.4
Title: DJRA1.2.4 - Data Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): P. Fuhrmann Due date: 31/04/13

Identification of the reviewer
Name: A. Read Affiliation: UIO EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1/JRA1

Review date 04/10/2013
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

A. Read's commented etc version of the reviewed document.

General comments

In general I found the form and content of the document very good (and happily the results are very positive) but there are many details which could improve its readability. I have commented heavily and suggested many small changes in the document which I have uploaded, and asked for clarification of a number of minor points.

A number of my comments address the obvious consequence of several contributions to the report, inconsistent notation (e.g. is it GFAL2 or GFAL-2, is the name of the workpackage EMI Data or EMI Data Area, or Data area, etc).

The list of references seems longer than necessary but I guess it is not worth a big effort to thin it down to only the references cited in the text.

I don't think any of the points I raised are so important that they require explicit feedback from the authors to me.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)


Detailed comments on the content

Please see the version with comments and tracking enabled I uploaded to the review page.

-- FloridaEstrella - 08-Apr-2013

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