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Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: DJRA1.4.1
Title: DJRA1.4.1 - Infrastructure Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI_DJRA1.4.1_draft_v3.doc
Author(s): Laurence Field Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Balazs Konya Affiliation: LU EMI Activity/External project or Institute: TD

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General comments

Please find my review comments for the DJRA1.4.1 Infra area workplan below. Can someone please copy it to the relevant wiki page?

The items collected do not have the same importance, some of them are trivial to fix, others may require more substantial effort. I leave it up to the author to decide which one he wants to address. This deliverable is unfortunately pretty late and i see no reason to delay it even further.

cheers, Balazs

DJRA1.4.1 review by Balazs Konya 19/10/2010.

reviewed version: v0.3, taken from the deliverable page

* page 5, terminology: ARC stands for Advanced Resource Connector and not "A-synchronous" smile

* page 8 "3. Status":

The infra area is actually also responsible for the containers (ARC HED and Unicore containers). Please add that to the enumeration (after Virtualization & Clouds)

Similarly, please add a short paragraph describing the ARC Container and the UNICORE Service Hosting PTs.

* Page 12 "3.6 Virtualization & Clouds"

This section is supposed to describe state of the ART in Virt and Clouds area. Instead of doing it, it presents some text copied over from the Dow "...virtualization activity is going to be addressed within EMI ...:"

This is a completely irrelevant text for a state of art. Please try to find a better text from the Dow or from somewhere else. The state of the art should not describe plans.

* page 13 "PLans ARC LDAP-based Infosys Development"

There are several places where the due date is set as "n/a". Which looks very strange in a workplan. Please fix it. As if i saw Mattias Ellert's mail with dates. Please re-ask Mattias for the proper dates.

* missing from the document:

I was not able to find even a slight mentioning of the planned work around the EMI Service Registry. There is already an EMI Registry PT that will be active during the first year. Please include this PT into the infra area workplan.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

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-- FloridaEstrella - 20-Oct-2010

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