JRA1/SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.4.2
Title: DJRA1.4.2 - Infrastructure Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): L. Field Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Riccardo Zappi Affiliation: INFN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1/SA1

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

  • The document is without page numbers.
  • Some references are without protocol schema.
  • There are a lot of sub-task deadlines on M13 and M13 is very close.
    • In particular, about 4.2 and 4.3 "Messaging investigation ...", there is the first subtask (ID1) with deadline M12, and three/four subsequent subtasks (ID2,ID3,ID4) with deadline on M13 and they are depending on task ID1. I know that it is a high-risk objective, but it seems missed by design.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 ?? 2 Executive Summary: - The sentence "it is not even sure if such an interface is required" seems not be compliant with one of the main objective (obj.2 ) of EMI. (RZ)    
2 ?? 3.5.2 "The original authentication model proved too difficult to implement ...". It could be useful some details about the analysis of pro and cons of the original authn (which?). (RZ)    
3   3.7 There is a new line within the same sentence. ("task force \r\n document") (RZ)    
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Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 06-May-2011


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