SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.6.2
Title: DJRA1.6.2 Integration Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): A. GIesler Due date: __

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Cristina Aiftimiei Affiliation: INFN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1

Review date 05/26/20111
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Document need some clarifications, adding of references and terminology.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 xx x.y Sequence of comments and replies separated by twiki signature and date    

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

Topic attachments
I Attachment History Action Size Date Who Comment
Microsoft Word filedoc 2011-05-25_DJRA1.6.2_v0_4_CA_adressed.doc r1 manage 194.5 K 2011-05-30 - 15:52 AGieslerExternal Cristina's review document and comments from Andre
Microsoft Word filedoc 2011-05-25_DJRA1.6.2_v0_4_ca.doc r1 manage 228.5 K 2011-05-26 - 23:48 DoinaCristinaAiftimiei  
Unknown file formatodt 2011-05-25_DJRA1.6.2_v0_4_ca.odt r1 manage 68.5 K 2011-05-26 - 23:47 DoinaCristinaAiftimiei  
PDFpdf 2011-05-25_DJRA1.6.2_v0_4_ca.pdf r1 manage 225.9 K 2011-05-26 - 23:48 DoinaCristinaAiftimiei  
Microsoft Word filedoc 2011-05-30_DJRA1.6.2_v0_6_JKN_and_CA_Adressed.doc r1 manage 277.0 K 2011-05-30 - 15:46 AGieslerExternal Contains Jon's and Cristina's addressed review comments
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