JRA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D2.2.1
Title: DNA2.2.1 - Training Plan Doc. identifier: EMI_DNA2.2.1_v0.5.doc
Author(s): K. Cassidy Due date: 15/12

Identification of the reviewer
Name: M. Riedel Affiliation: JUELICH EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1

Review date 08/12/2010, second review 2011-01-31
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Good document, only minor comments inline the attached document.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Sometimes, some points could be formulated a bit more positive:

- e.g. it is encouraged to project members... - e.g. we hope...

Anything else fine!

Detailed comments on the content

Enclosed in the attached PDF File - track changes with Word on an ODT version was not really possible.

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 xx x.y Sequence of comments and replies separated by twiki signature and date    

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 08-Dec-2010

Topic attachments
I Attachment History Action Size Date Who Comment
Microsoft Word filedoc 2010-12-14_EMI_DNA2.2.1_v0.5_MRi.doc r1 manage 166.0 K 2010-12-15 - 00:10 MorrisRiedelExCern Review using track changes of word.
Microsoft Word filedoc 2010-12-14_EMI_DNA2.2.1_v0.5_MRi_KC.doc r1 manage 174.0 K 2011-01-12 - 13:09 KathrynCassidy Responses to reviewers comments. Note that this is NOT the new version of the document, just the responses to the reviewers comments. The changes to the document were extensive and it was impossible to respond to each comment in-line as in many cases the text to which the comment was attached had been removed or completely restructured.
PDFpdf EMI_DNA2.2.1_v0.6_MRi.pdf r1 manage 334.3 K 2011-01-13 - 08:53 MorrisRiedelExCern  
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