Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D2.2.3
Title: DNA2.2.3 - Training Plan Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): K. Cassidy Due date: 30/10/2012

Identification of the reviewer
Name: F. Estrella Affiliation: CERN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: NA1

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 7 Exec Summ Please include how this deliverable differs from its predecessor.    
2 7 Exec Summ "This proved infeasible, although the largescale follow-up survey is planned to go ahead before the end of the project."
Please expand this to explain why this was not feasible.
   
3 7 Exec Summ "The coverage of the training has been increased during this period, with more products being addressed"
Please indicate the increase in terms of number and %
   
4 7 Exec Summ "In terms of future plans, work to produce a number of new online tutorials is well under way with these expected to go live in November 2012."
Is this still going ahead, taking into account the changes in NA2?
   
5 7 Exec Summ "An entirely new training infrastructure based on FutureGrid resources is now available for use by remote learners, and possibly also in face-to-face courses."
Rationale behind FutureGrid collaboration, why? what for? impact?
   
6 9 Ch 2 "To facilitate this, NA2 publishes its training materials to public repositories and collaborating partner sites, and the project encourages other projects to make use of these." >br/> Can we be more specific here - which public repos, which collab partner sites have EMI doc    
7 27 Concl "Some items identified in DNA2.2.2 have not been addressed, such as the follow-up survey to assess the longer-term impact of the training activities, but this will be investigated before the end of the project."
Is this still on, given changes in NA2
   
8 27 Concl "Although the project is entering its final stages, a number of training events are in planning for the final period and even beyond the lifetime of the project."
Can you be more specific about the planned events post EMI
   
9 17 3.6.1 Check incomplete sentences    
10 - - FutureGrid: Do we know if the installed UNICORE product is being used? If the EMI tutorials have been accessed already?    
11 - - change EMI-1 -2 -3 to EMI 1, EMI 2, EMI 3    
12 - - Who will organize the training @ EGI Manchester?    
13 28 Ref Replace R1 and R2 twiki references with CDS URLs    

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

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