SA1/JRA1 Deliverable Review Form

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General comments

The reviewed chapter 3 is structured very clearly and can also be read very fluently. All in all, there are almost no comments from my side.

It is clearly outlined in the workplan who has to do what, until when , and which risks can influent the result. I have noted only some spelling and a few other comments in my review. If my comments (almost only formatting and typos) are adressed I would accept the document.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

Review of sections 1,2,4,5

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

Note 3: Hello Andre, I am just letting you know that I went through section 3 again myself and picked up a few errors and missing references. I haven't touched any parts corrected by you. I have put these into v0.5. No need to review yet until Morris has made the Gantt chart.I've also done all the other stuff like Exec Summary, Abstract, Conclusions etc. Cheers, John.

-- AlbertoDiMeglio - 12-Jul-2010

-- FloridaEstrella - 29-Apr-2011