Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.3.3
Title: DJRA1.3.3 Security Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): J. White Due date: 30/04

Identification of the reviewer
Name: J. M. Daivandy Affiliation: JUELICH EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1/JRA1

Review date 04/16/2012
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Link to reviewed document: https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/pub/EMI/ReviewDJRA133JD/EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.3.odt

General comments

The provided document provides a thorough overview over the work done in the EMI Security Area in a well structured manner. Most sections give appropriate detail on the subject matter while still being concise, albeit some sections could have benefited from additional information, especially concerning exact reasons for certain courses of action (see 'Detailed comments on the content').

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

  • Provide additional information regarding "too much effort" evaluations / estimates
  • At least give schedule estimates regarding decisions on currently pending concerns
  • Reduce typos

Detailed comments on the content

See Record/Tracking notes in reviewed OpenOffice document (see above for link to document).

  • I have accepted changes and have made some of the smaller changes recommended.
  • The changes requiring more information will need some time.

* EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.3.odt: Reviewed deliverable.

* EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.3.1.odt: Updated deliverable.

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Unknown file formatodt EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.3.1.odt r2 r1 manage 87.5 K 2012-04-16 - 16:42 JohnWhite  
Unknown file formatodt EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.3.odt r1 manage 91.0 K 2012-04-16 - 15:09 UnknownUser Reviewed deliverable.
Unknown file formatodt EMI-DJRA1.3.3-v0.4.1.odt r1 manage 92.0 K 2012-04-27 - 14:44 UnknownUser Reviewed deliverable
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