Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D5.4.3
Title: DJRA1.4.3 - Infrastructure Area Work Plan and Status Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DXXX-CDSREF-Title-vx.x
Author(s): L. Field Due date: 30/04/12

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Riccardo Zappi Affiliation: INFN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1/SA1

Review date mm/dd/yyyy
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

I found some points where you could elaborate/fix to improve the already well-done document.
1) 3.1 you mention lesson learnt and improvements done. Could you elaborate quoting some examples?
2) 3.4 has a empty lines
3) In 3.7 there aren't references about CAR and StAR.
4) In 3.7 you could be more specific about PTs that have to implement StAR (dCache, DPM and StoRM)
5) In 4 a summary of the results could help to making profitable the reading. 

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 xx x.y Sequence of comments and replies separated by twiki signature and date    

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 24-Apr-2012

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