With the finalisation of DJRA151 we can now initiate the ToC review of DJRA152. Before sending DJRA152 ToC for review, there are a number of things that we should clarify first. As DJRA152 is an  update of DJRA151, I would expect the ff reflected in the structure of document
-Status report/Review and assessment of P1 standardisation workplan: achievements of past period vs planned objectives; deviations and justifications, if any
-P2 standardisation workplan: should include detailed workplan, harmonisation (if any), evolution (if any), gantt chart

The other sections eg Roadmap and KPIs, are relevant and should remain.

Perhaps these points are addressed within the deliverable; the ToC however does not clearly reflect it.

I hope my comments are reasonable. I have based these on the procedure for periodically updated deliverables
https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/bin/view/EMI/EmiUpdateDeliverableProcedure .

If you agree with these comments, please upload the revised ToC and inform the PO latest 21/04


-- Main.FloridaEstrella - 20-Apr-2011
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