JRA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D2.3.1
Title: DNA2.3.1 - Dissemination and Use of Knowledge Plan Doc. identifier: EMI-DNA2.3.1-1277621-Dissemination_Plan-v0.4.1
Author(s): Pina Salente, Andrea Caltroni, Diana Cresti,Emidio Giorgio
Due date: 12/01/11

Identification of the reviewer
Name: M. Riedel Affiliation: JUELICH EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1

Review date 2011-01-12
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date 2011-01-27

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

Document looks ok after minor revision.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Extend the collaborations or write more about it in the future.

Detailed comments on the content

Enclosed in the uploaded document review using word option "track changes".

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

N Page Section Observations and Replies Is Addressed?
1 xx x.y Sequence of comments and replies separated by twiki signature and date    
2 9 3.1.3

Reply to mri (01/12/2011, 12:01): "..." the paragraph have been slightly changed, is it clearer now ?

Now clarified explicitly.

not really, a sentence like 'the difference between organizationa and communities is' would help
3 10 3.2.3 I personally agree, but everywhere is written that we have 4 mw...there should be an official statement. ok and taken as action item to the PEB, but ok in this deliverable
4 14 3.3.5

The creation of a specific RSS feed for the EMI distribution is planned. This will be placed on the home page and will contain all the technical news and advisories.

This has been also more clearly specified

NEW: one could add also RSS feeds for each of new component releases after EMI-1...

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FloridaEstrella - 04-Jan-2011

Topic attachments
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Microsoft Word filedoc EMI_DNA2.3.1_v0.4.1_MRi-answers.doc r1 manage 280.0 K 2011-01-25 - 11:55 EmidloGiorgioExCern Answers to Morris's comment (their implementation is in 0.5.2).
Microsoft Word filedoc EMI_DNA2.3.1_v0.4.1_MRi.doc r1 manage 248.0 K 2011-01-12 - 13:49 MorrisRiedelExCern  
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