Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: DSA1.1
Title: Periodic QA Report Doc. identifier: EMI-DSA1.1-1277556-SoftwareMaintenanceAndSupportPlan-v0.6
Author(s): Francesco Giacomini Due date: 2010-05-31

Identification of the reviewer
Name: Morris Riedel Affiliation: Juelich Supercomputing Centre EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1

Review date 2010-10-18
Author(s) revision date yyyy-mm-dd
Reviewer acceptance date yyyy-mm-dd

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link:

General comments

  • Document reads nicely - only minor comments
  • Track changes was not possible due to open office - I compiled a pdf and commented on this one instead
  • 03/12/2010 MR: the document looks ok from my point of view.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

  • One idea would be to remove conclusions from documents since the executive summary provides room for the same highlights

Detailed comments on the content

  • see commented document

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors. These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described.

Note 2: Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word/OpenOfficeWriter change tracking features.

N Page Section Observations Is Addressed?
1 xx x.y Sequence of comments and replies separated by twiki signature and date  

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc. can be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- FrancescoGiacomini - 06-Oct-2010

Topic attachments
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PDFpdf EMI-DSA1.1-1277556-SoftwareMaintenanceAndSupportPlan-v0.6_MRi.pdf r1 manage 535.4 K 2010-10-18 - 22:07 MorrisRiedelExCern Commented version of DSA1.1 by Morris
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