JRA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D4.2.2
Title: DSA2.2.2 - QA Tools Documentation Doc. identifier: EMI-DSA2.2.2-QA_Tools_Documentation-v1.doc
Author(s): L. Dini Due date: 23/03/11

Identification of the reviewer
Name: M. Riedel Affiliation: JUELICH EMI Activity/External project or Institute: JRA1

Review date 23/03/11
Author(s) revision date mm/dd/yyyy
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

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Lorenzo Dini 27-04-2011

  • 47 references have been added to the most relevant technologies.
  • All reference suggestions have been applied
  • All text modifications, typo corrections and re-phrasing have been accepted.
  • The executive summary was not reduced as it was sized according to the deliverable guidelines (actually it was even a little short)
  • Service Level Agreement changed to Support Agreement
  • The requirements indexing has been simplified as suggested explaining were to refer to for full descriptions
  • The implementation intro has been extended as suggested with a summary of the main solutions used
  • The small pictures have been enlarged as suggested making them more readable
  • About the toolchain charts, they are one per category. For Maven we picked dCache instead of UNICORE (the graph looked a little nicer). But in the text it is clearly explained that the PTs using Maven are ARGUS, UNICORE and dCache ones

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