SA1 Deliverable Review Form

Identification of the deliverable or milestone
Project: EMI Deliverable or milestone identifier: D4.2.2
Title: DSA2.2.2 - QA Tools Documentation Doc. identifier: EMI-DSA2.2.2-QA_Tools_Documentation-v1.doc
Author(s): L. Dini Due date: 23/03/11

Identification of the reviewer
Name: F. Giacomini Affiliation: INFN EMI Activity/External project or Institute: SA1

Review date 17/03/11
Author(s) revision date 25/03/2011
Reviewer acceptance date mm/dd/yyyy

General comments

The document is well written and is acceptable as it is. The only improvement I recommend is to expand the References section, which currently contains just one entry. In particular it would be useful to have references to the many tools and technologies mentioned in the document.

Lorenzo Dini 27-04-2011: 47 references have been added to the most relevant technologies.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

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