Deliverable Review Form

Attach the reviewed document to the deliverable page, put here a link

General comments

I've attached the document with the minor changes/suggestions to the review twiki. I'm happy to say the suggested changes are only cosmetic

High level summary:

I find the document well written and easy to read (much better than last year ;)). I'm not sure if sections 3.2.2 and 3.3.2 (planning metrics for EMI 1 and EMI 2) are really relevant in a Y3 report, but I won't insist in removing them. With Florida's previous comments included and the planning metrics for EMI 3 added I think this deliverable is good to go.

Additional recommendations (not affecting the document content, e.g. recommendation for future work)

Detailed comments on the content

Note 1: The reviewers must list here any observation they want to track explicitly and that require interaction with the authors
Alternatively all changes must be listed in the document itself using Word change tracking features (if you use Word)
Note 2: These comments have to be explicitly addressed by the authors and the action taken must be clearly described

Any other modification, spelling or grammatical corrections, etc must be done directly in the document using tracked changes or similar mechanisms that allows the authors to identify which correction is suggested.

-- AlbertoDiMeglio - 12-Jul-2010