Elba 2015 proceedings: poster on the impact of the GE1/1 station on muon performance

Proceedings

Communication with coll., feedback on proceedings

  • Date of circulation to GEM coll. 11/06/2015

Comments about author list

The maximum length foreseen for this proceeding was 2 pages. However, since the CMS GEM author list is 1 page long, the GEM CC decided to ask the conference organizers the permission to add an extra page. Although no answer was received from the conference, the GEM CC suggested that we should submit a three page long paper.

Comments by Paul Karchin

  • Use collaboration list if 3 pages are allowed. Done

  • Could remove fig. 1 and discussion if space is limited. Background rates are not really the topic of the paper. In the three page version there is space enough to keep it. The simulations to evaluate the capability of the chambers to withstand the background environment were included in the poster as well, and they were mentioned in the abstract submitted to the conference

  • no italics for units (e.g. kHz/cm^2) Fixed

  • Don't need a conclusion section (really a summary) in a short paper. Also, the summary overlaps with the abstract. The summary paragraph was modified in order to avoid overlaps with the abstract, but in the three page version there is space enough to keep a small summary sentence.

  • include standard funding acknowledgement sentence Done

  • typographical errors: aknowledge fixed pair od tau leptons fixed

Comments by Kerstin Hoepfner

  • For such short document, no need of section headings as we do in short physics letter In the three page version there is space enough to keep headings

  • In general, we need to think about the proper references. Just taking the latest proceedings is not correct. Suggestions for additional references are welcome, I will include them in the draft before submitting it to the conference

  • Make sure acronyms (GE1/1, CMS, etc.) are defined. Done

  • acronyms definitions (CMS, GEM) Fixed

  • Provide position measuring -> provide position measurement Done

  • Some unfortunate line breaks 10 kHz -> 10~kHz to avoid it Done

  • Add the TP to the refs. It serves for CSC aging and improved mu performance. Done

  • with the 3 pages you have enough space. Please add the fig explaining the bending angle (from your poster). Maybe also the mu spectrum for different benchmark channels (also on poster). Actually this plot has more information than your fig.3, you could replace it if you want to minimize the impact. I added both figures

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* Fig.1 has a ref [3] while the other figures do not. Aren't they all from either the TDR or the TP? Make it consistent. Done

  • L2 Compact... -> Compact... (CMS) Done

  • L18 Large Hadron.... -> Large Hadron ... (LHC) Done

  • L26 (also later L84) [3][4] ->[3,4] Done

* L30 accroding to CMS style guide standard model is written with lower case letters Done

  • L42 here you write Figure with capital F and later L52 with lower case f, make consistent Done

  • L65 and Fig.5 it probably comes from the TDR but isn't that a SM Higgs boson, so H and not h? Or is the VBF Higgs a non-SM Higgs? Ref.6 is about SM Higgs. It is a SM Higgs, I changed h into H

* L71 starting in 2023 -> the official number should be 2025 (actually changed this morning to 2026 but write 2025) Done

  • L80 It has been also shown -> It has also been shown Done

-- AliceMagnani - 2015-06-03

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