CWR Review

Comments from Sijin Qian:

Dear CFT-09-020 editors:

I have read through the CFT-09-020-paper-v5.pdf, and have some (big or small) questions and comments from a non-expert's point of view. I list them below, please make a note of it if any of them would be sound.

Thank you and looking forward to hearing from you,

-Sijin QIAN

Thank you very much for your comments and suggestions. Our responses are below (marked in red).


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(1) The front Page,

(a) in Abstract, the 2nd line, it seems that "Cosmic Run at Four Tesla (CRAFT)" should be changed to "Cosmic Run At Four Tesla (CRAFT)"

(b) At the bottom of this Page, in "PDFKeywords" area, there seems no keywords relevant to HLT yet.

All done.

(2) Page 1,

(a) L12, 13 and 36, it seems that the word "or" can be removed, i.e. "(or L1)" --> "(L1)" "(or HLT)" --> "(HLT)"

(b) L36, it may should be changed from "Ref. [3, 4]" to "Refs. [3, 4]"

All done.

(3) Page 5, L195, it seems slightly better to add a word as "The first is to collect (event) data ..." --> "The first function is to collect (event) data ..."

Done.

(4) Page 6,

(a) L261, it seems better that "or PDs" can be changed to "(PD)s".

(b) L262, a "." is missing, i.e. "(eg. all muon-" --> "(e.g. all muon-"

We have kept PDs as is for now since it is quite commonly used; we have fixed the missing "." .

(5) Page 7, L266, I'm not sure whether "... will be used at LHC startup." should be changed to "... will be used at the LHC startup."

Done.

(6) Page 11, L423-424, it seems can be simplified from "studies of level-one and high-level trigger performance ..." to "studies of L1 and HLT performance ..."

Done.

(7) Page 12,

(a) L425, similar as the above item (6), "level-one calorimeter triggers" --> "L1 calorimeter triggers"

DONE

(b) L440, as "RPC" has never been explained before, so it seems should add 3 words here, i.e. "and the RPC" --> "and the Resistive Plate Chamber (RPC)"

Thanks for catching this. We explain the acronyms in the detector section now.


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