A semi-empirical model for preheater design to trigger CO2 boiling for detector cooling

General information

• Contact person: Giorgio Baldinelli
• Author list: G. Baldinelli, T. French, F. Bianchi, J. Daguin, A. Onnela, P. Tropea
• Reviewers: Anders Ryd (chair), Nicola Bacchetta, Stefan Grünendahl, Katja Klein (ex-officio)
• Publically available as CMS Note-2020/004
• Status (May 2021): published as International Journal of Refrigeration 128 (2021) 12–21

First version of the draft

• First version of draft, as received on 13th of February 2020: pdf

Comments to the first version of the draft

• Comments by Katja, 5th of March: pdf
• Comments by Nicola, 5th of March: Notes_on_the_paper_pre-heater.docx
• Comments by Anders (with help of Yadira), 8th of March: Internal_Review_CO2Preheaters_YLBP-AR.docx
• Comments by Stefan, 11th of March: https://twiki.cern.ch/twiki/pub/Sandbox/CO2PreheaterModel/SG_preheater_comments.rtf

Second version of the draft, and replies to comments (29.4.2020)

• Manuscript_clean.pdf: New draft manuscript clean
• Response_to_reviewers.pdf: Response to reviewers
• Manuscript_with_highlighted_changes.pdf: New draft manuscript with highlighted changes

Comments on the second version for the draft

• Joint review committee response, May 24, 2020: 200522_preheater.txt: 200522_preheater.txt
• Comments by Katja, 25th of May 2020: pdf
• Comments by Anders, 28th or May 2020:200528_preheater.txt

Third version of the draft, and replies to comments (2.6.2020)

• Response to reviewers: pdf
• Manuscript with highlighted changes: docx
• New version (third draft): pdf

Comments on the third version for the draft

• Comments by Katja, 18th of June: txt
• Comments by Anders, 19th June: 200619_preheater.txt

Fourth version of the draft (23.6.2020)

• New version: pdf

Rework of manuscript after rejection by the International Journal of Heat and Mass Transfer (4.9.2020)

• Manuscript for new journal with highlighted changes: Manuscript_new_journal.pdf

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