l.44
I still think that the footnote could be confused with the affiliation "FBK" appearing as 1 on the same page, since you talk about a production process and FBK is by change a producer...


l.85-86
Looking in Bichsels article on Tab.V I would derive higher number:
80µm  255eV/µm= 70.8e/h/µm  -> ~7080e/h in 100µm
160µm 272eV/µm= 75.6e/h/µm  -> ~9800e/h in 130µm

How did you do it?


l.87ff. 
I still do not get here if those sensors (the ones with biasing structure) are the ones you tested, or if you describe a subset only.


Fig. 5, 6, 9, 10
You refer to dashed lines twice: for the limits and for the uncertainty. The latter ones are bands?


Fig. 6
I still think that the used threshold should appear in the plot or caption and not only in the text, since it is an important parameter for efficiency.


l.332
The guy's last name is "Hoß"